出国留学申请书（通用20篇）
Dear x,
Yours sincerely,
XX
Dear x,
To Whom It May Concern: As the Dean of Stonewell College, I have had the pleasure of knowing Hannah Smith for the last four years. She has been a tremendous student and an asset to our school. I would like to take this opportunity to recommend Hannah for your graduate program. I feel confident that she will continue to succeed in her studies. Hannah is a dedicated student and thus far her grades have been exemplary. In class, she has proven to be a take-charge person who is able to successfully develop plans and implement them. Hannah has also assisted us in our admissions office. She has successfully demonstrated leadership ability by counseling new and prospective students.
Her advice has been a great help to these students, many of whom have taken time to share their comments with me regarding her pleasant and encouraging attitude. It is for these reasons that I offer high recommendations for Hannah without reservation. Her drive and abilities will truly be an asset to your establishment. If you have any questions regarding this recommendation, please do not hesitate to contact me. Sincerely, Roger Fleming Dean of Stonewell College .
Yours sincerely,
XX
Dear x,
Yours sincerely,
XX
Dear Professor Zhiyong Lan，
My name is Lan Xi, a Ph.D. candidate studying Land Resource Management inCollege of Public Management, China University of Geosciences. I intend to spendone year of my doctor years in ASU School of Public Affairs by the end ofSeptember 20x for a Ph.D. Mobility Program which I can acquire more knowledgeabout international policy of land management.
The land resource management is really an important major in ChineseUniversity. It’s a subject of applied science which is combined both land policyand planning of land, and it helps the government to optimize the distributionof land resources. I’ve been studying the land resource management at least 7years since 20x when I was a college student, and I also love this major for 7years.
I’ve read about your papers about land policy published on some magazines,and I can feel your abundant knowledge and lofty personality in words. Moreover,your altitude about sustainable development affects me a lot. As myself, it’s sothankful for my 7 years studying of land resource management and 5 moreprojects. It makes me become an accomplished and experienced person. And I’msure I can help you and your team with some land projects.
I really want to join your team to learn more about the land resourcemanagement and exchange the experience. And I would greatly appreciate it if youcould send me more information about the application at your earliestconvenient.
Yours sincerely,
XX
Dear x,
The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to mychildhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modernentrepreneurs. As a young girl, it was inspirational hearing about his businessventures, and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. Mymother was also involved in business as an accountant, helping him with simplecalculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I, also, would somedaybe able to enter the realm of business.
As a high school student in China, I had to concentrate on the CollegeEntrance Examination (CEE), even so, books not related to the exams were neverexcluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June, 20x, Iwas so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in thedepartment of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional ChineseMedicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be afailure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms, I realizedthat I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At thatmoment, I lost my direction and objectives.
With the questions in my mind, I started to read many relevant books. I waslucky to read the book “Jack: Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch, in Which JohnA. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for acompany. When I was a junior, I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. Ishould manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shopeven made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the runthe shop. From this, my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business hasbeen greatly developed, definitely I was increasingly interested in what I wasdoing. By December, 20x, I had finally determined to take business managementas my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge, I strived togain more practical work experience in some big companies.
Fortunately, as a senior, I began by conducting an internship in theArchitecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months, I worked as anassistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the differentdepartments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadenedmy perspective of management conditions and business performance in differentindustries. The experience showed me that management is much more important thanthat of I thought in big companies. After graduation, I continued my work inthis company. In May, 20x, the company offered me an opportunity to participatein an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depthdiscussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me topursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual abilityand the brand new ideas I mentioned.
During the short period of training, I realized that pursuing a higher degreein management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster, with its excellence inmanagement, represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challengingenvironment, I can build the required foundation of knowledge related tomanagement to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission willbe my first step of success. With this in mind, I hereby submit my application,and await your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
XX
Dear x,
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast，I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations，depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms，or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor，who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch，such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
In contrast，foreign enterprises tend to welcome employees who have theability to make decisions on their own，though the extent to which this is truedepends on whether the supervisor is a local Chinese or an expatriate. Theseorganizat Applied Program：Organizational Behavior
The purpose behind this personal statement is to not only gain admission toyour well-established and highly respected Ph.D. program，but to impress uponyou my passion for learning and my tremendous desire to succeed in bothscholastic research and in teaching on the professional level. I have based mydecision to pursue an academic career not on purely practical reasons，butrather on my own natural interests and aptitude. My personal philosophy is thatmoney and social status should not be pursued as life-consuming objectives andthat in actuality they are the by-products of goals originating from one's innerneeds. I understand that my intellectual capacity is a gift，and I intend to usethis gift to the very best of my substantial capabilities.
I am interested in the field of study of Organizational Behavior. In thepast，I have had the experience of working in settings where the people and thecorporate cultures of the companies were all different. I have found that thereis a great difference in the both the behaviors of people and of theirorganizations，depending on whether they are state-owned enterprises (SOEs)，large multinational firms，or small to medium sized foreign enterprises. Onesimple example is that of the ability of an employee to act independentlywithout direct instructions from his or her boss. In many Chinese organizations，acting without direct instructions is considered a form of disrespect towardsthe supervisor，who is generally offended by such behavior. In my experience andresearch，such organizations tend to have low operating efficiency with theemployees losing their innate ability to take the initiative.
Yours sincerely,
XX
Dear x,
Following my graduation from High School I studied Biological Sciences fortwo years at the Catholic University of Chile in Santiago. From March 20xx toNovember 20xx I was obliged to take a break from my studies at university as myfather was moving from the city to a more remote rural area. While helping myfather I was able to work closely with birds of prey among others and I wassuccessful in breeding the endangered chinchillas. During my time away fromuniversity I continued to deepen my knowledge of my subject and studiedevolutionary thinking and the biological basis of behavior. I also worked for abrief time as a translator which made me think that perhaps my English was goodenough o complete my studies in an English speaking country.
Since coming to Oxford and studying at OLT I have improved my writtenEnglish a great deal. I am a member of The Natural History Museum (London) andrecently attended a course called "The History of Evolution." The course wasorganized by Birkbeck Collegeand took place at the Natural History Museum inLondon each Wednesday. The course has been fascinating and has served to confirmmy suspicion that the more I learn of this subject the more I want to know.
I am hopeful that my previous studies in Santiago, my maturity and myexperience in this field will allow me to enter the second year of anundergraduate programme in the UK. After completing my undergraduate it is mywish to continue studying at postgraduate level and ultimately conduct my ownresearch in this area.
My other academic interests include Paleoanthropology, and the history anddevelopment of science. I am most interested in the writings of Darwin andThomas and Henry Huxley.
I am keen on fitness training, horse riding, trekking and diving. I am mostinterested in all outdoor pursuits. I am also keen to develop my newly foundskills in classical singing and dance.
I realize that as a non-native student I will be required to work harderthan my contemporaries and I am prepared to do that. I have a cheerful andopen-minded disposition and look forward to sharing and exploring new ideas.
I hope my application will be considered favorably
Yours sincerely,
xx
Dear xx,
At the request of University of Denver, my student in Zhengzhou 19th HighSchool, I’m providing this reference, which I hope can be useful for you toreview her application to your undergraduate program.
I have been the Chinese teacher and class director in Zhengzhou 19th HighSchool for more than ten years. We are one of the most famous and high-qualityhigh schools in the whole city, the faculties in our school are all renowned andhighly-experienced. Though I’m relatively young in the school, I have lots ofexperience in Chinese teaching and student managing. I have been titled theoutstanding young teacher and class-director by school and city.
Yadi Wang came to my class in September 2006, the semester she entered ourschool. I know she is talent in music. She used to performance flute in ourschool activities, such as in talent show. In 2007, she passed the high leveltest of FLUTE LEVEL 8. She loves music that is all her classmates and schoolteachers know.
Another time was in a seminar, we ran a debate competition about teacher’sprofessional ethics. YADI WANG was the leading debater of the con side. Duringthe debate, she showed her wide knowledge and eloquence. She used lots ofproverbs, history figures and examples to support her stand, and every word ofher was incisive to get to the point, and also full of humors. Her performancewon both her teammates and opponents’ admiration.
In this reference, I didn’t mention much about Yadi Wang’s grade, which Ibelieve you can easily find was so outstanding from her transcripts and herranking (25th out of 1560 students), because I’d like to give you something thatyou cannot find from these documents but I think is equally important tocontribute to her excellence. I do hope, according to my recommendation, youcould give her a favorable review. Thank you! Please feel free to contactme.
Yours sincerely,
xx
Respectful Sir or Madam，
Best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Dear sir / madam,
Hello, my name isxxx，xxx University teacher. I am also very pleased torecommend to you my students xxx，and believe that it can be a good completionof your masters courses in your school.
Ever since he entered the University, he has often shown maturity andstability. Since most of the students in the class are from other provinces andcities, the experience of leaving home for the first time makes it necessary forthem to take a long time to adapt to the new environment. But I have noticedthat, by contrast,xxxx adjusted quickly and actively involved in the newenvironment.
There is a big difference between the curriculum of the University and themiddle school, and the emphasis is on the ability of self-study. Therefore, infreshman, sophomore, a lot of students have shown varying degrees of adaptation,do not know how to learn the University curriculum. However, xxx students have astrong ability to adapt, quickly find out the key business management courses,in a very short time to master the learning methods, and other teachers said heis very strong ability to accept new knowledge, new knowledge that hell be ableto digest, can be understood.
It can be said that some of the students in the class is holding a verygood college entrance examination scores into our school, andxxx by virtue ofhis strong self-learning ability and good learning methods. This, in eachsemester final exam has been well reflected, especially excellent achievementsin professional English in the final exam, the class is a smooth through the 46English exam students. His passion and determination to learn English is to moveme most.
In addition to the study of students in the school xx football players,actively participate in the activities of the school organization, strongorganization and leadership. He often comes to my office or give me a call, hemet together to discuss the problems in study and life, hope to get bettergrades in the. xxsaid the students is a good student.
I hope your school can give him a chance, let him in your school rigorousstudy style and good learning environment to continue to develop his expertise,further improve professional knowledge, broaden their horizons. Look at yourschool to consider its application.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
Dear XX,
A Chinese graduate student of composite materials, I would like to pursuePh. D. studies in a program in which I can do advanced inter-disciplinaryresearch that is built upon my expertise in both chemical engineering andcomposite materials. I find that your program is one of the few where suchresearch is possible.
To accomplish what I have accomplished, I have had to be more intelligentand overcome more difficulties than most of my classmates, for I did not get toreceive a regular undergraduate education. Although I performed strongly in the1988 National University Entrance Examinations and met the requirements foruniversity acceptance, I did not craft a good enough strategy in applying to theuniversities. As a result, my application fell through cracks, leaving me onlythe opportunity to study in a two-year college program, not to be discouraged bythis mishap, I studied with diligence and creativity, and succeeded in firmlygrounding myself in the studies of material propensities and structures. When Icompleted that program, I was as capable as most graduates from the honorsprogram in handling practical material problems from the angle of chemistry.
Upon graduation in 1990,I first took up the job of an assistant engineer ina biochemistry pharmaceutical manufacturer, where I was in charge of thedevelopment and analysis of several lines of products. I was given theresponsibility for VD Calcium Tablet in the first two weeks, as I demonstratedthat I was able to do independent research, particularly in terms ofquantitative analysis and microbiology inspection, from five raw materials tosemi-made and finished products. As my talents showed up, I took charge of theproduction and inspection of more and more products. Towards the end of 1991, Iwas awarded the honor of Excellent Employee in the factory of almost twothousand people in recognition of my contribution to its business.
Armed with the ability to quickly grasp the essence of new things, I madeeven more contribution to my second employer, a Joint-Venture Company ofcosmetics. In this company, In the first two months after I was hired, Iestablished, with reference to both the ISO and national standards,. Thecompany's standards of packaging materials for 35 different products fromcorrugated box to paper lid, from glass bottle to plastic cover. During thefirst half year, I turned myself from just a user of cosmetics to qualityengineer of cosmetic actively engaged in R. & D. Three new products (ElyseeVitamin E Cream, Elysee Tonique and Elysee Lipbalm) I helped to develop wererecognized as Provincial Scientific Achievements, for which I was conferredthree certificates of Honor. I believe that when one embarks on a new career, heshould be quick in accepting changes even though he must still stick to his oldprinciples.
In these six years of working experience, I greatly improved myself interms of technological expertise. I made chemical and microbiologicalexaminations of different drugs skillfully and independently, successfullydeveloped several new types of cosmetics, some of which merited the designationof Provincial Scientific Achievements. But more importantly, I learned to askmore sophisticated questions and then answer them.
The years of being an engineer has taught me how to be a person. I learnedto be both a team leader and a team player. Working in conjunction with others,I have always held onto the principle of being honest, modest and helpful toothers, whether I was just a technician, an engineer or even the assistant tothe general manager. I enjoy working with other people. I have been well likedby my colleagues. At the farewell parties for me, some of my friends were soreluctant to say goodbye to me that they would burst into tears.
While working for the Chinese factory, I was once "borrowed" by a collegeto teach there as an adjunct instructor for half a year. During those months, Ioften worked late to check students' work and prepare for the next day'sclasses. I believe that this teaching experience will serve me well should yoube able to offer me the position of a teaching assistant.
At the graduate school, I have met new challenges the old way. I firstacquired a profound understanding of the basic concepts and theories ofmechanics (theoretical and material ones), and then applied the fundamentals tomy major: composites. As you can see from the from the transcripts of academicrecord, this approach paid off. My first academic article Honeycomb SandwichComposite will be published in the second edition of the Journal of BeijingInstitute of Light Industry of 1998. Now I am writing my Master's Degree thesis,in which I shall compare the mechanical properties of corrugated cores andhoneycomb cores, analyze the outstanding characters of the latter, establish thestandards of civil-use honeycomb fiberboard, and consider the marketing futureof honeycomb fiberboard.
I am confident that the combination of my extensive working experience andmy solid academic training has adequately prepared me for advanced studies in mychosen field of specialty in your distinguished program. To undertake suchstudies, I have learned English well, so well that I was appointed first theEnglish secretary to the factory's director and then the assistant to thejoint-venture's general manager. In these positions, I dealt with internationalvisitors and handled English documents. Such English proficiency should prove agreat advantage to me once I am enrolled in your program.
Although I am now focusing my academic interests on composite materials,you may find that I may be more suitable for other majors. If so, I wouldgreatly appreciate it if you could advise me accordingly.
The following is a list of the research work I have undertaken under theguidance of my advisor (mostly in the area of industrial applications ofcomposites):
Yours sincerely,
XX
Dear xx,
My interest in young children first began my niece was born while my sisterwas still living with us. On a daily basis I would help care for the baby and Igained a large sense of my responsibility over those four years. Due to this, Ihave had a growing aspiration to work with young children. I feel that the firstfew years of a baby’s life need numerous positive role models. I have chosen toapply for this course because I consider myself to be a very maternal person andI believe this work to be enormously rewarding. Therefore I am expecting topursue a career with young children, preferably those aged from birth to 5years.
Throughout summer 2008 I worked as a volunteer at Sefton Resource Centrefor young people with disabilities. I worked with young children ranging fromages 3 to 8. I embarked on necessary training needed to care for the children inaccordance to their disability and age. During this experience my sense ofresponsibility increased. This was because I had to keep watch of at least twochildren who, because of their disability, had no real sense of danger. As wellas this, I feel that I now have a greater amount of empathy for the parentsbecause I had experienced only a few hours a week of their primaryresponsibility and their children’s need for dependency.教育学个人陈述#e#
I was assigned one child each day in which I was expected to take fullresponsibility for, this would be during trips to places such as the swimmingbaths and even when on site. Although I found this to be difficult on someoccasions, I enjoyed it and I formed a strong bond with a fair few of thechildren.
Yours sincerely,
XX
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am with great pleasure to submit this personal statement in support of myapplication for continuing my university education in your esteemed universityand wish you could give my application a positive and favorable assessment.
Currently, I am a junior student in International College of Hubei NormalUniversity majoring in Accounting. Thus, I have obtained great knowledge aboutbusiness for the past three years. Depending on that, I have determined topursue a Bachelor degree at your distinguished university. There are therereasons leading to me choose business, the most important reason is that I amvery interested in business. In my opinion, handling good business is the sameas successful work of art. That’s an exciting thing. The second reason is that Ihave already learnt it for three years, so I want to broaden my knowledge aboutbusiness which will benefit my future life. The third reason is that I want tobecome a successful business lady which is my dream all the time.
To be honesty, I am an average student but I have diligent and strongconfident heart. I believe that a good attitude can change bad situation. So Iam always keeping a positive attitude on my life. I never ever give up anychance of promoting my study. During my three years in Hubei Normal University，Inever fail a class and always do my best for assignment. However，in my mind,social activity is as the same important as class study. In my spare time, Itook part in student union and took charge of minister in arts department. Ourwell-organized activities attracted many students to practice themselves. Lastsummer, I joined the Work and Travel Programme to be a staff in an Americancompany for three months. I made good use of that chance to improve my oralEnglish and tasted western culture. I think I can understand and adapt to aforeign culture in a short period.
I firmly believe that anyone could acquire success by their right way andfighting. This is one of the reasons why I want to go abroad. What’s more, Iwant to taste and accept some western education. I hope that I can learn moredifferences between Chinese and British university education and widen myhorizon. Furthermore，as we know, UK is a very modern country. It owns the mostadvanced education system and top universities in the world. And graceful schoolenvironments deeply attract me. By the way, if I can learn in your university Iwould cherish and appreciate this chance. In the future, I also mean to applyMaster’s Degree in UK. But after that, I will go back to my country and look fora job related to business.
I really want to own a colorful campus life in your school, further developmy overall capabilities including organizational ability, teamwork spirit etc. Ibelieve I can adapt to a foreign life and acquire best degree. With all theabove mentioned, in terms of my understanding of business and my enthusiasm forit, I hope that I can be up to the standard of the admission requirements inyour university. I believe that my strong interest in this subject. last, mypositive attitude and comprehensive ability will facilitate my successfulcompletion of the proposed program. Thank you for your time!
Yours sincerely,
XX
Respectful Sir or Madam，
I‘m writing to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I’m very glad to hear you can provide scholarship for exchange students. That‘s really good news for me. And I am very appreciating that you can give me a chance to explain way I want to apply for a scholarship. My name is Haoyu Liu. I’m 17 years old and I‘m a fresh man in Taiyuan No.2 Foreign Language High School. I’m very proud of as one of my school. I‘m diligent and I know I must be a useful person. So I always tell myself that I have to learn more and more. I’m also very outgoing and I like to help people as possible as I can. That‘s way I got many friends. I was born in Jixian，a small county with poor land and terrible weather. My parents were farming at home. Even life doesn’t easy，I still hopeful enough. I still love my hometown and I want to do something for my country. So I want to learn more knowledge as possible as I can. I know how hard people‘s life. So I want to change it by myself. That’s way I‘m diligent and I like to help people. But when I went to high school，our life got worst. My parents can’t afford my tuition. So my father went to Taiyuan to find a job. And we have to rent a little house near by my school because my school is far from my hometown. But I still keep my faith，because I know that my family will support me to let my dream come true forever. When I got the information that I can be an exchange student，I was exciting but confusing. I really want to go to German to study but I don‘t want my parents worry about my tuition. So I’m writing this letter to you to apply for a scholarship of your school. I wish I can do better just because I have a dream that I can change my family，my hometown even my country. I hope I can share responsibility for my parents from this thing. At school，I‘m a good student. I’m interested about sports，arts and science. I also like to study foreign language. That‘s way I chose to study German and English at school. I noticed that language can let me communicate with others easily. But I can’t only study language. I have to know about the Germanic culture clearly. That‘s way I need to be an exchange student this time. But I need your trust. I need a scholarship of your school，because I’m a good student. I have a dream. In that dream，I can see my parents are smiling because I became a useful person. I can see my teachers are smiling when I came back from German. My will is strong. And I know I can do better when I go to German. So I‘m writing to you to apply a scholarship. And I’m waiting for your return. Thank you for your kind heart and reading my letter.
Best wishes.
Haoyu Liu
Dear x,
I am a girl born in a small city. The year I was 18, I left my hometown and came to a big city where I am going to study and spent my five-year campus life there. I have learnt to do everything by myself and enjoy good relationship with classmates in the college, which I used to be so much worried about. Be more confident and independent, I really look forward to enjoying a campus life in America. There’s no doubt that I’ll learn much more from the friendly people and culture there where is neither in my hometown nor my country.
I major in Urban Planning in my university, which is a dream for me when I was young. I try my best to learn more about it, and do pretty well in architecture. In addition, I really go for in art designing and painting. The interests and hard-working help me get the first price in a designing competition. When I learnt that my dreaming subject, Landscape Architecture is just available in UC Davis, I was so happy.
Urban Planning is a subject requires various knowledge, science and art, internal and external. And if I get the chance to go abroad means I get the chance to know more. It’s certain that the rich experience will help a girl get closer to her goal, which is to be a qualified expert in Urban Planning. In the near future, I plan to put my knowledge into practice. Teachers and Books teach me what other countries do with city development, but I never really know what it is like. So during the time I study abroad, I want to complete a cognitive map of UC Davis, have a study of image space on small scale.
Yours sincerely,
XX
Dear x,
I am a student, graduated from BaoYang middle school, Nanning, GuangXi autonomous region, in 2006. I am still studying in high school now, because I was not enrolled by the ideal university last year. Recently, I have a dream to study abroad. Then I search online and find that it is more convenient and suitable for me to go to New Zealand for study.
First, New Zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advanced education in the world. Second, the tuition is lower than other countries’, which I think is mo
re reasonable for me. Finally, the climate of New Zealand is similar with the climate of the South of China. Considering above reasons, I told my parents my plan on going to New Zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.
As a girl, I like preschool education since I was young. Nowadays, Chinese parents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention to preschool education. If I study specialized curriculums on preschool education, I will go back China and work hard on preschool education after leaving college.
My plan is as follows: first, I plan to study English in language institute for about a half year in New Zealand. Then, I will study specialized curriculums on preschool education.
I believe I have the ability of study abroad, because I have finished all high school curriculums. Besides, my parents both have job and have rich income, so they will support me to finish my study. After finishing my study, I will return to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as to realize my life value.
Yours sincerely,
XX
Dear x,
I recommend Miss Li without reservation and shallappreciate your favorable consideration of her application.
Dear XX,
My interest in Psychology and social science is the motivation for meapplying to study Psychology and Criminology. Psychology is my favourite subjectand I have thoroughly enjoyed every aspect of the A-Level course.
In addition to Psychology I have also studied Sociology, Photography andFilm Studies. Studying Psychology has given me a more in-depth understanding ofhuman behaviour and interaction, which I can relate into everyday life. StudyingSociology has enhanced my understanding of the society we live in and how itfunctions. These subjects have demanded commitment and time management and haveimproved my comprehension and analytical skills.
I have enjoyed an active role in school life. Whilst at ______ School I wasappointed as Prefect and I was nominated by my peers to act as Form Captain. Asa result I was trusted to voice the beliefs of my peers and hence I havedeveloped key people skills. In addition, I have helped to organise sports day,the harvest festival and school open days.
In my spare time I enjoy reading; my favourite books include: ‘The CuriousIncident of the dog in the Night time’, books by Dan Brown and ‘Harry Potter’. Ialso enjoy swimming, going to my local gym, walking and socialising.
The career I am hoping to go into once I’ve finished the course would be tojoin the police force or within prison’s as a forensic psychologist. I am veryinterested in helping reform criminals whilst inside prison and on parole andhave always been interested to find out how the criminal mind works and why theycommitted the crime. This course will lead me into this career and open up manyopportunities to work with and help criminals.
I believe that university will provide me with the opportunity to developas a person. I am hard working, intellectually curious and determined to besuccessful. I look forward to the new experiences and opportunities, universitywill provide me with and guarantee to participate whenever possible.
Yours sincerely,
XX
Dear x,
I live in Pakistan-a country destroying itself with bombs,guns andgovernments' blabber to find justifications for what it is going through;acountry where a former president is murdered in public,where the nation'sconstitution and parliament are suspended at the same time,and where the voiceof a common man is unheard.
I enjoy Literature,especially the works of Shakespeare,TennesseeWilliams,Thomas Hardy and Andrew Marvell.I'd be delighted to study in achallenging atmosphere where I can focus on my studies.I commit to my work andmy ability to think out of the box,keenness for Politics and my perception ofthings,I understand,gives me an edge over others.I believe in myself,and ifprovided with an opportunity,I'd make the university proud.
Yours sincerely,
XX
Dear x,
I come from a background where my family has been in the retail trade forthe last hundred years. Whist I was growing up I have been actively taking partin the running of the business. My family has given me the opportunity tofurther myself in achieving my goals. I believe studying at university will giveme the opportunity to progress in the understanding I currently have in BusinessStudies and ICT. I believe that I can combine my interest in Business Studiesand Accounts to excel in Business Management
At my secondary school I was handed the privilege and the responsibility ofbeing head prefect. My responsibilities included attending meetings with theschool principal and school staff. I believe these installed essentialcharacteristics such as leadership
I was also the school football captain and represented the school at manyinter-schools sports activities. Furthermore I represented the WildlifeConservation Society of Zambia, which is a charitable organisationfor theprotection of wildlife in Zambian Game Parks. Part of my duties included givingtalks to other students concerning conservation and wildlife. I thoroughlyenjoyed this particular segment of my work because conservation is an issueclose to my heart
I am presently enrolled at Redbridge College in Romford where I am studyingthree A2 courses in Mathematics, ICT and Business Studies, and one AS-Level inAccounts. I do take part in several sports activities not only to remain in goodphysical shape but also meet new people. I did not achieve all my targets but Iam confident that with extra effort and help from my tutors I will push past mypredicted grades. I have drawn up a plan of what needs to be done over the nextfew months in achieving this. Over the last year I have developed at a personnellevel. I understand that the onus is on me to push myself to achieve myambitions
Outside of college I have a passion for sports both for enjoyment purposesand maintaining fitness. Football is at the centre of my love for sport, but Ialso enjoy and participate in other sporting activities such as cricket, squash,badminton, tennis, table tennis and long distance running. I am hoping to carryon these activities whilst conducting my studies at university. I believe sportsplay an important role in providing a balance between education and physicalwellbeing
It has long been my ambition to complete my studies at a Britishuniversity. As it is well established Britain has the finest reputation forhigher education around the world. A degree from a British university willassist me in my future career. I am very much looking forward to educationalchallenges that university has in store for me. I am also looking forward tomeeting the different cultures and backgrounds that will exist of anyuniversity. But most importantly I believe I have the prerequisites not only toachieve a good degree but to progress at a personal level. This would act as afoundation for any future success in the business world.