分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息在学校网站上看到学校篮球体育俱乐部要招收一名成员的消息，给俱乐部负责人Mr．Brown写封信，表达你想加入该俱乐部的愿望，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：爱好并擅长篮球；英语流利；有一定的比赛经历． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：look for寻找；First of all首先；be good at擅长；Secondly其次；More importantly更重要的是；look forward to盼望Recently I read from a notice on our school website that the sports club is looking for a basketball player．（高分句型一）I am sure that I can make our basketball club stronger and more powerful if I become a member of it．（高分句型二）
解答 Dear Mr．Brown， I am learning English in our school as an exchange student from China．Recently I read from a notice on our school website that the sports club is looking for a basketball player．（高分句型一）I believe that I am just the right person you are looking for．First of all，I love basketball and I am very good at playing basketball．Secondly，I have no problem talking with others in English．More importantly，I took part in many basketball games in my school in China．I am sure that I can make our basketball club stronger and more powerful if I become a member of it．（高分句型二） I am eagerly looking forward to your reply． Yours， Li Ming
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．